【议论文】CET-6提纲作文

【CET-6提纲作文】How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities. Four suggested solutions to this problem are listed below. You should write no less than 160 words. Remember to give a short introduction and a brief conclusion. Write your composition clearly.

四种可能解决住房问题的方案：

1.多造高层建筑

2.向地下发展

3.建造卫星城市

4.疏散城市人口

【范文】

How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities

The population on earth is increasing rapidly, and with the development of modern industry, more and more people are flowing into cities. As a result①, the housing problem in big cities is becoming more and more serious.

There have been many suggested solutions to this problem. And I'm in favour of② the idea of building satellite cities in the suburbs. The fresh air and beautiful scenery will attract people to leave the overcrowded cities. With many people leaving the cities, more space will be available③ for those remainders④. We can find a lot of good examples in

other countries where this “housing problem” has been successfully solved by building satellite cities.

In the meantime⑤, I don't think developing the underground will help solve the problem. I can hardly imagine that people would like to live under the ground, without the blue sky and the golden sunshine. That will make people feel totally bored and uncomfortable.

The building of satellite cities is a good method to solve the housing problem. It not only relieves the burden⑥ on the big cities, but also provides a much better environment for people to live in. Of course, there is no perfect way to solve the problem. The housing problem is very complicated, involving many other problems such as transportation. We cannot rely on⑦ one way to solve the problem completely.

【注释】

①As a result: 结果

②in favour of: 支持

③available: 可获得的

④remainders: 留下的人

⑤In the meantime: 同时

⑥relieves the burden: 减轻负担

⑦rely on: 依靠

【简评】

这是一篇根据中文提纲提示展开的议论文。题目针对城市住房问题，提出了4种解决方案供考生进行选择，要求考生表明自己支持哪项方案和反对哪项方案，并说明支持和反对的理由。

第一段中，作者首先点题，交待了城市住房问题日益严重这一背景。紧接着下一段提出作者赞成建设卫星城这一方案及原因。第三段以in the meantime进行过渡，转入反对向地下发展这一方案，并略述原因。最后，作者再次阐明了自己的主张并指出：We cannot rely on one way to solve the problem completely.

本文重点突出，详略得当，立论和驳论相结合，说理明晰。文字通畅，连贯且富于变化，I can hardly imagine, relieve the burden, rely on, in conclusion等语言亮点，给读者留下深刻印象。

资料来源：新大学英语四、六级考点透视丛书：六级写作/李华田主编，武汉大学出版社，2006